I need a seven second lover;
so jump under the cover
of cotten bed sheets.
I don't feel bad for
the man you say you love;
I've no commitment to him
(or you for that matter).
I need a 10 minute break;
I think I've made a mistake
let me out of the cotten covers
I need to breathe
The man, I say I love him;
That's his knock at the door
(How do I tell him I hate him)
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this is a joint-writing effect between myself and Greg Batt, check out his work on this site [link]
the man is a genius i swear  the first stanza is his.. and the second stanza is mine.. only he edited to make everything fit together right |
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he must be handsome
Both stanzas go perfectly, they don't seem... erm... glue together at all =]
Kewlness. Now I have to go look at the rest of your gallery, thanks a lot -_-
I hope you enjoy the rest of my poetry
thanks again!!
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