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It was your eyes that I noticed first,
Something in the vast blue ocean contained,
In such a fragile iris,
It was a few lines of text that started it all,
Started this knocking, started this opening,
Started me wondering how your body can contain you,
And how I do not fall apart at your words,
How so many great things can come from one conversation,
How many more can come from the ones we’ll have,
And how I strive to make you smile just to see it,
I will be your little poet girl if you’ll be my stability,
I will be your lover if you’ll have me,
I will support you if you’ll bare my soul,
And I will be your friend if you will just hold my hand,
It’s your turn.
©2008-2010 ~smuggeridge
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it's yours...
it was written for you...
and i mean every word

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:iconsmuggeridge:
happy new years handsome...
let the good times roll....
:iconghbatt:
It is a happy year now, Susanna...

...roll on to Saturday night
:iconteela-y:
Good poem. :) It's romantic, and thoughtful.
:iconsmuggeridge:
it's easy when you have the right inspiration :)
:iconkossori-monoceros:
Me and my boyfriend...all over again.

Thank you. Ghbatt was right, you are truly a poet in your own right.

--
Sometimes you must try;
Sometimes you just die;
But sometimes you gotta die trying!

VINCERE VER MORDI!
Victory or death!!

(Even if I must die trying, I will still prevail.)


The Wind rages yet!
:iconobjoyful:
So romantic, and flows beautifully. I love the line: "Started me wondering how your body can contain you;" it's an amazing thing, being with someone who's soul is so much greater than the breadth of their physical being (at least that's the way I feel about my s.o. ;) ).

Wonderful job! :)

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The latest in thank you pics: [link] :D

My avie was made by ~liriophin - Thank you soooooo much! :D
:iconsmuggeridge:
Thank you so much for taking the time to come view my work. It really means so much to me. I'm new to the site and still a little self-conscious over my skills. It is so great to have people like it.
Thanks again.
:iconsmuggeridge:
It was actually the fastest poem I've ever written. You got exactly what I meant by that line. His soul is so much greater than his body and it makes it so easy to write.
Thank you so much for reading my work. Like, it really means so much for me that you would take time out of your day to leave your comments. I'll definitely be checking out your gallery.
Thanks again.

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